Dear Elegance,

Blessings...  Your narrator can become human again.  What do you think she needs to do?

Love,

Harry

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very nice . god bless you.

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Hail Pandit Raja Ramachandra :) ;)

Thank you for philosophically analysing my philosophical ramblings on Elegance' poem :)

Ha ha...you are funny!! :) :)

You are analysing my poetry and comments way more than necessary....Don't read too much between the lines...its just comments and poetry and that's that!!

Neither is my left/right brain or heart in any kind of quandry or confusion...so no thank you to those hints :)

But thanks for the comment anyway!!

Blizzy,   (Elega, pl permit me to intervene here : ))

Now that you are turning a bit philosophical, let me answer yr query regarding heart : )) Most people mistake the term 'heart' in philosophy, to the physical heart! As you said the physical heart has no feelings - its only job is to keep ticking! The philosophical heart is actually your right brain - that part of the brain which triggers your instincts and intuition. Most of the time the left brain ignores the cries of the right brain, because we have been trained to think logically.

When a person starts trusting his intuitions, he may fail initially. But, things work out well after a few failures. Success breeds success........... Well, I hope I've given enough hints Blizzy......... rest is for yr 'heart' to find out : ))......... cheers.......... Raja.

Hey Elegance,

Ouch! That was kind of  sad....
why does the poor heart get blamed for everything...Its only job is to tick away to keep a body alive or so I think....

Isn't it all about the mind...the elusive mind that has a gazillion things going through it and breaks away to smithereens due to information overload!!! :) :)

Then again what is lies?? There is probably the 'truth" and the 'lies" then a whole shade of grey in between...that has no definition....

Just getting warmed up into a philosophical rambling here :) :)

Excellent poem. While reading  , a chubby lil girl sitting  with her face in her hands came to my mind.

Indu

Hi DSam,

I agree My spirits rose soon after that phase .... Thank you for your lovely words

Love,
Elegance20

Hi Raja,

Nice to see you here Thank you so much for your compliments ... 

Love,
Elegance20

Hi Anneshwa,

That phase of non-humanness lasted only for as long as the depression I am glad these verses came as an offshoot of what was otherwise a horrible phase ..

Love,
Elegance20